Know Who..why

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Know Who..why


I Donno..I must have shed a tear..or two..
For..someone I loved..or may be you..
My heart is damp..
I feel a cramp.
and my intestines churn..so bad
When u were here..all seemed so glad..
I have waited on..
For things.. unknown..
The pleasure seem..so weird..unsure..
If I get ..maybe..
What I crave for..
Will u be the one..??

I bargained my life for...

Comments

  1. Unknown3 March 2017 at 01:42

    Vividly put at the end. Short, deep and beautiful..!

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  2. Unknown3 March 2017 at 02:55

    Mst

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    1. ASHIMA3 March 2017 at 02:57

      Thank you.. Appreciation is the sincerest form of encouragement😊

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  3. Unknown3 March 2017 at 06:16

    Good luck di ...well put ...short and apt.....

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  4. Unknown3 March 2017 at 06:28

    Yes. Very beautiful thought. I liked. Ashima.

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  5. Unknown3 March 2017 at 06:42

    Good one , waiting for next good one mam

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  6. ASHIMA3 March 2017 at 06:53

    Sure...there are lot many to be shared😊

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  7. be creative3 March 2017 at 06:57

    Oh my....Very well written... Looking fwd to read more:)

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  8. Unknown3 March 2017 at 07:03

    Very beautiful lines.. mam

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  10. Unknown3 March 2017 at 07:22

    Awesome.. .superb

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  11. Unknown3 March 2017 at 07:29

    Beautifully written....way to go Ashima!!

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  12. Rashmi Soni3 March 2017 at 07:43

    Too gud...

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  13. Unknown3 March 2017 at 08:14

    It was awesome .
    All the very best Ma'am

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  14. Avinash3 March 2017 at 08:53

    Hey Ashima, what a brilliant start... The deepest feelings described well in few lines... Wish you All The Best... HAPPY WRITING !!

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    1. ASHIMA3 March 2017 at 08:57

      Thanks Avinash...for the encouragement☺

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  15. Unknown3 March 2017 at 11:12

    For sure I will be the regular follower of your blog.
    I had that same feeling while reading your writing which I get while reading shekhar kapoor.

    Wish you all the very best and love ma'am :)

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  16. Unknown3 March 2017 at 11:14

    For sure I will be the regular follower of your blog.
    I had that same feeling while reading your writing which I get while reading shekhar kapoor.

    Wish you all the very best and love ma'am :)

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    1. ASHIMA3 March 2017 at 19:05

      To be understood and to understand...You made my day..Thanks Honey Satpal☺

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  17. kamlesh seervi3 March 2017 at 11:14

    Nice one
    Simple nd straight. This gives strength to feelings which otherwise get pushed behind weight of literary intelligence
    Looking forward to read more.......

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  19. Unknown3 March 2017 at 12:16

    This is on of the best poems I've seen! I can't wait to see your next one!
    -Oorja xoxo

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  20. Unknown3 March 2017 at 12:56

    Beautiful way to express thoughts & feelings...wishing you all the best :)

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    1. ASHIMA3 March 2017 at 19:01

      Thank you Dii n Oorja☺ Makes me greedy for all the nice things said😋

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  21. Unknown3 March 2017 at 18:45

    A very special feeling for self arises while reading the beautiful text.....very well written with deep thoughts..... waiting for the next...

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  22. ASHIMA3 March 2017 at 18:59

    Thank you Anubha..loves

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  23. Unknown3 March 2017 at 19:16

    Very natural n true, even with close eyes when I imagine this Get The feel.

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  24. Unknown3 March 2017 at 19:46

    Amazing...
    You are a Versatile personality ...
    Cheers

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    1. ASHIMA3 March 2017 at 20:45

      Thank you Anil ji for your kind words☺

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  25. Vivek4 March 2017 at 02:29

    Beautiful & nicely knitted! Superb overflow of an emotional heart!!

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  26. Unknown4 March 2017 at 10:43

    If words could have described you, I would have! You always surprise me with the hidden talents of yours! You're an inspiration ma'am

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  27. Devanshu5 March 2017 at 02:10

    Very beautiful Lines

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  28. Unknown5 March 2017 at 09:50

    GOOD...

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  29. Unknown17 March 2017 at 00:58

    Good 1 ...

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