OYSTER

By -
OYSTER

 Where the heart meets the ocean of emotion,
And the waves of reality strike,
Therein you'll find me my lover...
Behind the rocks, beneath the tides.

Comments

  1. Unknown17 March 2017 at 01:02

    Nice 1. Feel like connected with the ocean.

    ReplyDelete
  2. manjeet singh17 March 2017 at 01:21

    Nice one ........

    ReplyDelete
  3. manjeet singh17 March 2017 at 01:21

    Nice one ........

    ReplyDelete
  4. Unknown17 March 2017 at 01:29

    Beautifully written....heartfelt lines..superb as always

    ReplyDelete
  5. Unknown17 March 2017 at 01:30

    This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Anonymous17 March 2017 at 01:44

    Amamzing vocab!
    Love the way u created a image in my head

    ReplyDelete
  7. Unknown17 March 2017 at 01:55

    I Feel amazing avrytime when I see you lines.. it really touched my heart.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Unknown17 March 2017 at 02:00

    I Feel amazing avrytime when I see you lines.. it really touched my heart.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Lakshya Jain17 March 2017 at 02:03

    Beautifully created, words are floating like waves guided by tides of emotions

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ASHIMA17 March 2017 at 06:36

      It's a daunting task to publish comments. BRAVO!!

      Delete
  10. Lakshya Jain17 March 2017 at 02:06

    Beautifully created, words are floating like waves guided by tides of emotions

    ReplyDelete
  11. Unknown17 March 2017 at 02:16

    Great... Keep going.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ASHIMA17 March 2017 at 06:35

      Looking forward for more encouragement:)

      Delete
  12. Avinash17 March 2017 at 02:54

    Love and Emotions well explained !! Brilliant...

    ReplyDelete
  13. Avinash17 March 2017 at 02:54

    Love and Emotions well explained !! Brilliant...

    ReplyDelete
  14. Unknown17 March 2017 at 03:14

    Beautifully expressed :)

    ReplyDelete
  15. Ayushi Goyal17 March 2017 at 07:48

    Artistic..!!

    ReplyDelete
  16. Unknown17 March 2017 at 09:37

    Deep thoughts expressed through words ...amazing😎✌🏻👍🏻

    ReplyDelete
  17. Unknown17 March 2017 at 10:57

    So nice.... loved the last line!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  18. Tushar Jain17 March 2017 at 11:46

    When the heart meets the ocean of emotion
    And the waves of reality strike
    My eyes go moist
    Because they see something that nobody can...!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ASHIMA18 March 2017 at 05:35

      Only an ex-student can come up with new dimension to your theory. Thanks Tushar!!!

      Delete
  19. Vivek17 March 2017 at 23:50

    From where you got the depth?
    A beautiful amalgam of YOU and the LADY in you.....
    Superb expression of the spiritual love....

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ASHIMA18 March 2017 at 05:34

      Sir, I am not yet ready for sooo much adulation. Much appreciate, Thank you so much:)

      Delete
  20. Shyamtak18 March 2017 at 04:59

    Nyc.... thought

    ReplyDelete
  21. JK Jasmatiya18 March 2017 at 05:00

    Ocean, a symbol of depth & Oyster, a symbol of love....
    You touched both with your splendid words.
    Your writing mesmerises ...... keep writing.... God bless 👍

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ASHIMA18 March 2017 at 05:32

      JK it's the perfect explanation for the symbols used. Many thanks:)

      Delete
    2. Unknown18 March 2017 at 11:38

      I could feel the depth of the love u expressed with the beautiful words. Well done keep it up

      Delete
    3. ASHIMA1 April 2017 at 07:32

      Thank you Pinky..much love:)

      Delete
  22. Amit Lila18 March 2017 at 05:14

    Beautiful words and feeling expressed

    ReplyDelete
  23. Amit Lila18 March 2017 at 05:14

    Beautiful words and feeling expressed

    ReplyDelete
  24. ASHIMA18 March 2017 at 05:31

    Thank you Amit:)

    ReplyDelete
  25. Himanshu Kiran Sharma18 March 2017 at 05:37

    Beautiful
    Loved it..

    ReplyDelete
  26. Unknown18 March 2017 at 06:35

    Just a few words have become mirror of the heart....Beautifully written...keep it up..!!����

    ReplyDelete
  27. Unknown18 March 2017 at 10:53

    Beautiful lines touches the heart

    Keep writing from your heart

    ReplyDelete
  28. Unknown18 March 2017 at 11:26

    Nice thoughts

    ReplyDelete
  29. Unknown18 March 2017 at 12:08

    Beautiful lines....

    ReplyDelete
  30. Unknown18 March 2017 at 15:08

    Very deep and meaningful xx

    ReplyDelete
  31. Unknown18 March 2017 at 21:25

    Keep going ashima, beautifully designed.

    ReplyDelete
  32. ASHIMA1 April 2017 at 07:33

    Thanks Amit:)

    ReplyDelete
  33. Ayushi2 April 2017 at 08:40

    Awesome!!

    ReplyDelete
  34. shanuparakh7 April 2017 at 10:37

    Nice lines

    ReplyDelete
  35. Unknown15 April 2017 at 00:44

    Lively

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ASHIMA11 June 2017 at 23:46

      Thanks Manish...ages..its been, almost lost touch..good to reconnect!

      Delete
  36. Amit Lila15 April 2018 at 07:43

    Beautifully expressed :)

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

STRANGERS

By -
STRANGERS We met as strangers always Your eyes spoke to me, Each time enquiring about me Yet you passed by my side Saying just nothing. Just want to ask you, For once… Do you know me?
Read more

Invincible Mirage

By -
Invincible Mirage For I shall hold you, Again tomorrow and today, For setting you free Is not my aim I shall hug you tight In my dreams May be push you away a little ...it seems You shall walk only with shackles tied Of my memories you did well... .... to hide Bondage and if not bonded they say I would like you that way..
Read more