DFF (Dumb friend forever)

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DFF (Dumb friend forever)

In my most darkest and deepest thoughts
In my vulnerability and my ghost talk
In my constant chatter,
careless banter n things that matter...

I Donno how you creep in..
Stealthily in my mind walks..
Is it the passion ...?
My daily ration...
And the wait for some illusion..
That takes away the night from the days...
And the days away from the night..

Some confession...
Straight n forthright..
I don't wanna be left..
No longer wanna be Right..

Comments

  1. Unknown17 April 2017 at 00:07

    Hmmmmm

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  2. ASHIMA17 April 2017 at 00:09

    OMG hard to please English Sir :(

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  3. Amit Lila17 April 2017 at 00:14

    Day by day u r improving a lot. Your writing becoming more soulful.

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    1. ASHIMA17 April 2017 at 00:19

      Thanks Amit...trying to touch emotions felt simply through a girl in any stage of life. Hope I write meaningfully while doing so!!!

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  4. Unknown17 April 2017 at 00:24

    Direct from soul......

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    1. ASHIMA18 April 2017 at 06:50

      Thanks MM...you have been quite the factor for this blog....All the credit!!!

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  5. BHAWANI SONI OFFICIAL BLOG17 April 2017 at 03:07

    I Opened this blog..
    I Read this Blog..
    I felt The Feelings behind this blog..
    i found det Chatter Still Matter..
    i went in past..
    I felt that these moments were the Awesome Moments n Feelings Which i have ever realised..
    This Passion Was really Never Forgatable..
    Nice Lines Mam..
    Very Nice..
    I Expect that.. in the nxt flickerng U will Describes some funny n Unforgatable touch of that chat also..which cannot Be erased frm Memory..
    repecting this..
    waiting for Nxt Blog..

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    1. ASHIMA18 April 2017 at 06:51

      Thanks Bhawani..your appreciation is soooo overwhelming....!!!

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  6. Himanshu Kiran Sharma17 April 2017 at 09:55

    Good one ..
    Keep writing

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  7. Unknown17 April 2017 at 14:37

    Well articulated 😍

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  8. Tushar Jain18 April 2017 at 10:14

    Tushar :
    Reflect feelings from deep inside for someone. Quite lucky the person is!

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  9. Rekha S Parihar19 April 2017 at 08:26

    That's lovely Aashima,it really came from a person with deep thought who actually want to explore her feeling.very well written.

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    1. ASHIMA26 April 2017 at 00:02

      Thank you Rekha for reading n appreciating.

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  10. Rekha S Parihar19 April 2017 at 08:27

    That's lovely Aashima,it really came from a person with deep thought who actually want to explore her feeling.very well written.

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  11. Unknown20 April 2017 at 09:27

    Nice lines ma'am

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  12. Unknown20 April 2017 at 09:32

    Real expressions! Touching

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  13. Shyamtak20 April 2017 at 09:35

    Shi hai ji..... ✌👍👌👏👏👏

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  14. Unknown20 April 2017 at 09:44

    Deep!! Really Touched..

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  15. Unknown20 April 2017 at 09:44

    Deep!! Really Touched..

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  16. Avinash20 April 2017 at 09:58

    Excellent one !! Getting better n better n better n better... Love to read what you write!!

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  17. Avinash20 April 2017 at 09:58

    Excellent one !! Getting better n better n better n better... Love to read what you write!!

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  18. Unknown20 April 2017 at 10:37

    Excellent one !! Getting better n better better good

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  19. Ayushi20 April 2017 at 11:45

    Beautifully described !!
    Waiting for the next

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    1. ASHIMA26 April 2017 at 00:05

      Ahh...You read them...that says it all;)

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  20. Unknown20 April 2017 at 12:05

    Wonderful..! Hope more to come!

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  21. Anandi20 April 2017 at 14:00

    AMAZING MASSI LOVED IT

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  22. Unknown20 April 2017 at 19:27

    Superb...as always..can compile all in the form of a book !!

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    1. ASHIMA26 April 2017 at 00:08

      Thank you too much Sir for consistently reading and commenting on the blog...:)

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  23. Unknown20 April 2017 at 20:38

    Simply Wow
    Reading over n over again

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  24. Unknown20 April 2017 at 20:38

    Simply Wow
    Reading over n over again

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  25. Unknown20 April 2017 at 20:47

    Amazing mam😊...👌

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  26. Unknown20 April 2017 at 21:07

    Really Girly and with full of emotions 😇🙌🏻

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  27. Unknown21 April 2017 at 20:28

    It can only come out from a person like u. Really a deep thought

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  28. Unknown23 April 2017 at 02:18

    Great lines

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  29. Unknown27 May 2017 at 12:54

    Beautiful poem Ashima

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  30. ASHIMA28 May 2017 at 23:01

    Thanks Deepika...it just reinstates the belief that a beautiful soul sees only the beautiful things in others. Thanks again for your kind words...much loves:)))

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  31. Tanu10 June 2017 at 03:45

    O my.. keep it going..

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