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You are killing yourself bit by bit
Under garb of ignorance or disbelief
The unpretentious smile
The candid talks, emotions juvenile
The carefree careless laughter with abandon
That mischief imbecile....
In between the love n hate
In the game of Romance-date
Somewhere you got lost

You can still return jus give it a thought.

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  1. Anonymous1 May 2017 at 09:44

    Hmmm

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    1. ASHIMA1 May 2017 at 23:10

      Thank you Manish Sir, even your Hmmmm means a lot!

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    2. Anonymous2 May 2017 at 01:43

      Nice said aashima ji

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    3. ASHIMA2 May 2017 at 23:37

      Thank you:)

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  2. Avinash1 May 2017 at 09:45

    Fabulous !!! Loved it completely... N specially the closing super sixer !!! You can still return jus give it a thought !!! Simply wow...

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    1. ASHIMA1 May 2017 at 23:10

      Thank you Avi...hope this reminded you of heydays!

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  3. Avinash1 May 2017 at 09:46

    Fabulous !!! Loved it completely... N specially the closing super sixer !!! You can still return jus give it a thought !!! Simply wow...

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  4. Amit Lila1 May 2017 at 09:46

    Superb

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  5. Unknown1 May 2017 at 09:48

    Is this so easy...

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    1. ASHIMA1 May 2017 at 23:21

      Its for those who drift away..effort could be made to return

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  6. Amit Lila1 May 2017 at 09:48

    I do agree with Avinash.last line is a master stroke

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  7. Unknown1 May 2017 at 09:49

    Once fall in....no way out

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  8. CA Goutam Baid1 May 2017 at 10:38

    👍👍

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  9. Unknown1 May 2017 at 10:51

    So nice!

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  10. Anonymous1 May 2017 at 11:49

    Rituals..... made by humans to ease n enjoy the life more beautifully.... really !!!!
    Now u suggest Breaking the boundaries to achieve the same ..... wow .... simply mind blowing, practical n spiritual too ��

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    1. JK Jasmatiya1 May 2017 at 11:50

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    2. ASHIMA1 May 2017 at 23:22

      Thanks J.K....I like the way you find a spiritual dimension to them..

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  11. Unknown1 May 2017 at 13:09

    Wonderful 😍

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  12. Rekha S Parihar1 May 2017 at 18:32

    Simply superb !! Loved the uncontrolled emotions jauted down in form of poem and beautifully used vocab .

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  13. Unknown1 May 2017 at 19:02

    Mmmm...It is tough BT once u overcome from dis ..life becomes more beautiful☺

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  14. Unknown1 May 2017 at 19:03

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  15. Kiran1 May 2017 at 23:40

    Lovely writing .....

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  16. Unknown2 May 2017 at 03:42

    Ohh maam .... One of the best quote...copy past and forward to all :) 😄

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    1. ASHIMA2 May 2017 at 23:36

      I really really appreciate your sweet gesture. You can follow it all up on instagram.. with some more stuff to pass on:)

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  17. Alok2 May 2017 at 07:25

    Very inciteful

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  18. Unknown2 May 2017 at 13:08

    Wow! I am ashtonished by your talent. You are gifted with lots of blessings. Keep on writing and let us enjoy your touching words.

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  19. Vivek3 May 2017 at 08:02

    Good reflection...punch to tizzy, tangled & shattered youth.....with a ray of hope in last line.....parallel to the Buddha's philosophy.....Dukh ha, dukh ka kaaran ha, dukh nivaran ha & dukh nivaaran ka maarg ha...

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    1. ASHIMA5 May 2017 at 23:17

      Absolutely..!!! Whatever is in our power is reversible :)

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  20. Unknown7 May 2017 at 06:22

    Very true lines and expressions beautifully woven 👍

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  21. Unknown7 May 2017 at 06:23

    Very true lines and expressions beautifully woven 👍

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  22. Unknown8 May 2017 at 10:22

    maam..you are multi-talented..!! :)

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    1. ASHIMA26 May 2017 at 23:44

      Thanks...do put your name so that I can return the sweet gesture!

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  23. Anonymous9 May 2017 at 00:01

    Simply superb mam...!!

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  24. Unknown26 May 2017 at 02:07

    Excellent..

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  25. ASHIMA26 May 2017 at 23:44

    Thanks...do put your name so that I can return the sweet gesture!

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