CK-INTO YOU

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CK-INTO YOU

I wanted to embrace you
In my tightest squeeze
I wish I could hold you
a little more, while you sleep
May be your fragrance would’ve lasted me forever

The forever be, till I breathe…
The emotion so true, the love so deep,
May be it isn't that enough
Another life-time is what I'll need.

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  1. Unknown1 July 2017 at 00:41

    If you have your loved ones with you today, you should hug them. Memories cannot be hugged.....

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  3. Amit Lila1 July 2017 at 00:47

    Great going Ashima. How small is our life for love. Love and hug both are perfectly defined.

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    1. ASHIMA3 July 2017 at 01:29

      Indeed..there is no perfect time to cherish moments...but to live them there n then!

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  4. Unknown1 July 2017 at 01:05

    Strong emotions are raised in your Poetry 😊

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    1. ASHIMA3 July 2017 at 01:30

      Ahhh...thank you Deepika, all emotions need a vent!

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  5. Anonymous1 July 2017 at 03:26

    Hmmmm

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  6. NEELAM KUMAR JAIN1 July 2017 at 04:02

    Outstanding imagery in this romantic love poem :

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    1. ASHIMA3 July 2017 at 01:31

      A sneek peek into into the love-brain:)

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  7. Unknown1 July 2017 at 07:25

    Amazing poetry

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  8. Tushar Jain2 July 2017 at 11:29

    Hugs are definitely the best form of showing affection.. well said Ma'am

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  9. Avinash8 July 2017 at 21:46

    Love is an abstract feeling.. The little sweet nothings become most soothing when you are in love !! Well written !!

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  10. Avinash8 July 2017 at 21:46

    Love is an abstract feeling.. The little sweet nothings become most soothing when you are in love !! Well written !!

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  11. Vivek21 July 2017 at 05:19

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  13. Vivek21 July 2017 at 05:22

    well defined spiritual love for both who understand each other well......without counter expectations....
    otherwise it may b suffocating.

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    1. ASHIMA21 July 2017 at 23:34

      Every relationship has a honeymoon period, n then a cold wind of reality. If one is able to stand both...then the path to love and understanding is laid..

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