OBITUARY
OBITUARY
I remembered you today and every day, when I felt low, and I cringed to cry hard to myself. When I felt the world engulfing me in its darkness, I followed the light you had once brought to my life.I fall flat on my face in the circular drum of pitch darkness trying hard but not reaching even to your remotest thoughts.
I think you..And you are in the strand of every thought that arises, carefully woven web, mesh or garment of my naked soul. Your eyes seethingly pierce my heart through that darkness, you seem one of those ghosts that dusk brings. I have lost you to darkness of your soul and mine. RIP!!!
I remembered you today and every day, when I felt low, and I cringed to cry hard to myself. When I felt the world engulfing me in its darkness, I followed the light you had once brought to my life.I fall flat on my face in the circular drum of pitch darkness trying hard but not reaching even to your remotest thoughts.
I think you..And you are in the strand of every thought that arises, carefully woven web, mesh or garment of my naked soul. Your eyes seethingly pierce my heart through that darkness, you seem one of those ghosts that dusk brings. I have lost you to darkness of your soul and mine. RIP!!!
Nice way to express your feelings. Well defined ecstasy. Well done one's again.😊
ReplyDeleteThanks Amit...this time its a non-poem...hope it made some sense...Hahhha:)
DeleteNice way to express your feelings. Well defined ecstasy. Well done one's again.😊
ReplyDeleteSo well written..
ReplyDeleteThank you didi...I am glad even my nieces are reading this stuff, trying to understand as well:))
DeleteBeautifully explained the departure of a dear one is not always left behind enormous sadness !!!
ReplyDeleteIndeed...u nailed it!!!
Deleteheartfelt expression !!
ReplyDeleteRead between the lines and you will find, it holds true for others as well ;)
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