CLOSE HUG

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CLOSE HUG

I hold back n reflect
Still in your arms…
You ask me…
what's that runs in my mind?
Didn't have an answer then,
I just have it now!
Eternity is what, I had wished for…

With every loosing grip,
of your hold over me...
increasing distances of 
muted silences...
Shivering and sighing...
Wouldn't we be better people
Completely entwined?

Comments

  1. Unknown2 November 2017 at 02:34

    Very nice lines ma'am

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  2. Unknown2 November 2017 at 02:55

    Very Nice all lines

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  3. Unknown2 November 2017 at 03:40

    Ma'am u r jst amazing...the way u express emotions or any phase of life in such beautiful lines......love it😊

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    1. ASHIMA7 November 2017 at 22:26

      Thanks Uma, hope you are doing well, TC!

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  4. Unknown2 November 2017 at 03:40

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  5. Sunaina Godhwani2 November 2017 at 05:45

    Beautifully written

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    1. ASHIMA7 November 2017 at 22:26

      Thank you didi for the love and encouragement!

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  6. NEELAM KUMAR JAIN2 November 2017 at 07:19

    Incredible

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  7. Avinash4 November 2017 at 11:02

    Eternity is what we always feel when in right arms !! Brilliant expression of deep feelings !!

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  8. Avinash4 November 2017 at 11:02

    Eternity is what we always feel when in right arms !! Brilliant expression of deep feelings !!

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    1. ASHIMA7 November 2017 at 22:21

      Love is real when it's true, otherwise it gets clouded by doubts!

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